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    hmph

    sounds like it could be made into a 30 second loop. 1:44 & 3:51 seems to be the only times when something happens.

    TiGeR responds:

    Can't please everyone I guess, although I don't think you even listened to it all.

    ~TiGeR

    not bad

    sounds like something ive heard before.

    Nijg responds:

    Yeah it probably has similar chord progressions to other techno songs. (But I assure you I didn't purposely copy anything.)

    booooring....

    its like a lot of other tech dance songs. Nothing unique in this one.

    TIMarbury responds:

    sorry you don't like it... lol. at least give me advice on how to make it better.

    hmm...

    what kind of adventure? when it started out it seemed like we were going shroom hunting....no offense lol but I really liked it after 0:23

    thatbennyguy responds:

    haha thx for the feedback

    its aight

    the song doesnt have much of a climax. I'm not of a fan of the sound that starts at 42 seconds.

    MoNkEyBoY1993 responds:

    thanks anyway dude.
    like i said, this is an old beat, and a very interesting + unusual one, hence the title.
    it was really an experiment, so yea thanks a bunch, all of my newest works are here for u to listen to :D

    very good

    I liked it. but yea i think it would be cool to hear a remastered version of it.

    alertG responds:

    or a mastered one at that. i am working on it though. thanks for the review

    meh

    idk...its just boring. This song doesn't have anything that makes it unique or special.

    dacookup responds:

    this is rap ... u make it hot with ya lyrics,,,
    The end is nice .. cool change ups... / Drops

    Good.

    Def a lot of parts I liked but than some parts were kinda boring and common. I think the climax of the song needs to have some more sounds and be amplified. I love songs that can surprise me some some great beats that I didn't see coming around the corner. Overall it was good.

    DJ-Fr0stbite responds:

    Thank you for the input, I'll use the suggestions :)

    Rule #1

    Too much repetition

    khalillondon responds:

    couple things bro..

    1. This was my second shit, just uploaded late because I debated whether I should upload this or not.

    2. This is not instrumental to just listen to, this is an instrumental that someone can hop on to and rap. It is separated by 16 lines, hook, 16 lines, hook, so on and so forth. There's no need to change up anything to the extreme because then if someone were to decide to hop on this, then it would 95% most likely sound weird as hell.

    That's basically what I had to say about this. I respect your comment though, in fact, I'm surprised I did not get a lot of reviews saying that, but I believe the score you gave me was a bit ridiculous. Thanks for the comment though.

    meh

    its just boring...same thing throughout

    khalillondon responds:

    lmfao this was my first shit man, hop off.

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